First a proviso on Tom Robbins -- He wrote a book that all the Vietnam & post-Vietnam people read, Even Cowgirls Get The Blues, which was very far out and extremely intelligent. That's where I got hooked on him. The thing about Robbins is -- some of the boundaries many people choose to recognize are invisible to him, and the content in his books can get a bit, shall we say, blue. Back in the late eighties MTV ran ALL the Monty Python TV shows, one a night each night at 10:00. Before each show MTV would announce -- "Monty Python's Flying Circus has been known to offend the easily offended. So, if you are one of them, do us both a favor and don't watch!" Same with Tom Robbins. Maybe this proviso is unnecessary, but I thought I'd post it just in case. About writing structure -- Another well-written book that comes to mind written in second person present tense is Bright Lights Big City by Jay McInerney. A great book (urban hip) and a huge bestseller by, unfortunately, a one-hit wonder. I'm writing in third and first person now, but I'm going to try a second-person story someday. 'Cause when they work, they really work. From: Kent Graham To: [log in to unmask] Sent: Monday, October 28, 2002 9:59 AM Subject: Re: [PWA-L] Vicky info Vicky Woodward wrote: I recently finished reading a Tom Robbins novel, Half Asleep in Frog Pajamas, that I thoroughly enjoyed. It's written in second person present tense. Thanks, Vicky, for exposing yourself to this crowd! Vicky touched on a subject that comes up frequently, one that engenders lots of points of view: person and tense. The "classic" choice is third person, past tense. It's the story-teller's voice. By convention, mystery/detective fiction these days is almost always first person, past (except when it's not....) Experimental writers seem to be in love with the third or first, present. But I don't know that I've seen a whole book done in second, present. Whattya think? How do you react when there's a shift from the expected -- mainly to present tense. What does that do for (or to) the story? Anyone tried it? And with what results? Pains? Madnesses? Discuss it among yourselves. Scribite! kg