Mary Ross wrote: >I'm recalling a problem I had in novel class <snip> How do you guys decide where to end/begin chapters? Any tricks or >just when it feels right? > You know, I think it just depends on the book, the audience, and your overall structural plan. I just finished a memoir-style novel that had fewer than 15 chapters. The author broke between major life events and to facilitate long time lapses. On the other hand, a recent fast-moving mystery had more than 20 chapters, some of which were just a few pages long. Lindsey Davis, Diane Mott, and a couple others whose names escape me at the moment -- most of them writing with a touch of levity -- have had one-page, one- paragraph chapters. Some writers seem to deliberately make their chapters of a standard, one-sittings' length, so the reader has a logical place to stop for the night. He: "Are you ever going to turn off that @#$@ light?!" She: "Just got to get to the end of this chapter!" That said -- Matt's got it right. For this reader, a chapter is a both a reading convenience and a logical guide to the story's structure. To be both, a chapter needs unity -- sort of all about the same thing -- and it needs a logical start and an logical ending. The beginning may be a sequel to previous events, as Matt suggests, or it could be an abrupt time/place/viewpoint transition. In either case, a chapter's most effective for me if it flows logically from that opening, and ends with either the hook that Matt describes, or tidily (if temporarily) wraps up a sequence of related scenes. A kind of textual cadence, if you will. Then again -- who knows? Chapters may just be the result of an editor's page count. "..18...19...20...New chapter!" ~kent