Hey Teresa, Just now looking over the site and was thrilled to find Nancy Sommers there. Other oldtimers may remember when she was at OU, not Harvard, and visited the Writing Project to ³try out² her ³new² ideas on revision. I still have an ancient handout and notes and still use her grid to force revision on my advanced students. Go figure. Anyone unfamiliar with her work, might enjoy hunting down her article -- Sommers, Nancy. ³Revision Strategies of Student Writers and Experienced Adult Writers.² College Composition and Communication 31 (1980): 37888. Later, Sandra Effingee [log in to unmask] From: "Rothrock, Teresa J." <[log in to unmask]> Reply-To: "Rothrock, Teresa J." <[log in to unmask]> Date: Thu, 29 Jan 2009 17:23:00 -0600 To: <[log in to unmask]> Subject: Take 20 http://bedfordstmartins.com/take20/