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"deborah a. chester" <[log in to unmask]>
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Open discussions on the writer's craft <[log in to unmask]>
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Mon, 16 Feb 2004 09:46:01 -0600
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The amount of detail depends on the stakes in the combat scene.  If
everything is on the line for the viewpoint character, then naturally
more detail is expected, because instinctively readers understand that
length can/should indicate the degree of importance.  On the other hand,
if it's just another slog in the gladiator arena, skim over the thing.
As for the fight scene in Hamlet, the emotion and sacrifice were the
thing, not every en quarte, parry, and riposte.

Another factor is taste.  Just how gruesome do you want to be?  I landed
The Alien Chronicles book deal because I can write exciting action
without spilling entrails all over the page.  Brutality and gore, just
for the sake of it, is gratuitous and unnecessary.

DC

Kent Graham wrote:

> A member of the historical fiction mail list posed this question -- in
> part -- yesterday.  I can think of several responses, ranging from
> philosophical to technical
>
> "If there is anything in our [human] history, that is always
> present, is combat. Wars, fights, quarrels are
> something never gone. But how do you describe this
> kind of violence?"
>
> <snip, in which he complains about how few pages Tolkien uses to
> describe combat, as opposed to how many he uses to describe walking
> around and climbing mountains>
>
> " I think readers want to read about details when it
> comes to fighting. If I were to write something
> similar to The last Samurai (which is a movie, I
> know), I would describe every move, every gesture,
> every thrust of the sword. I wouldn't do something
> like Shakespeare in Hamlet: "Hamlet and Laertes
> fought."
>
> What do you think?   How much is needed?    Is it desirable to
> describe "...every move, every gesture,
> every thrust of the sword"?  And if so, how do we describe it?
>
> Scribite!
> kent


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